Would my answer get proper credit?
“Identify a factor that affect’s Apax pension plan’s ability to take risk, and whether it decreases or increases its ability and why.”
I wrote “A growing ratio of inactive to active plan members decreases ability to take risk because more outflows will be apparent without the necessary inflows from active participants.”
But: their answer is fancier: "** The higher the proportion of inactive to active members, the shorter the duration of the plan’s liabilities. Shorter duration liabilities imply lower risk tolerance."**
Is my answer still right? If not, how do I make better responses in the future?