a couple of weeks ago I uploaded my first draft and asked for help in terms of looking through my resume and offering me helpful pointers to trim useless jargon and help me make my resume presentable. To the fellow cube monkeys that helped…Thank You from the bottom of my heart. I cleaned it a bit but still feel it needs work…please take a look and give me your feedback… I work in investment ops but am trying to break into an ER role… again any pointers i may be able to get are both valuable and appreciated. Thank you all very much Here is the link to my resume: http://www.razume.com/documents/16852