Hey folks. Sorry to do another one of these.
My work experience got rejected, and I wondered if anyone had any advice. I tried to be specific, but without getting overly detailed. Here’s the text I used:
“I collect and process data on public securities, private equity holdings, and hedge funds. I use the data to generate performance and asset allocation reports for the client, and internal reports that are used in the investment decision-making process.”
Does this seem too vague or too brief? Do I need more detail? Different wording?
I’d appreciate any tips folks have. Thanks in advance.